Free Creative Writing Tutorial: 3 Powerful Ways to Start a Story That WOW Teachers and Examiners

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As it’s an incredibly difficult time for most families, I wanted to give back by holding a free weekly tutorial class for children ages 9-13.

Each week, I’ll be teaching live on Facebook, covering a specific topic within English. This might range from creative writing to comprehension.

This week’s topic was on 3 powerful ways to start a story that WOWs teachers and examiners.

Not only can you watch the replay of the tutorial, comment underneath on either Youtube or our Facebook page, but you can also download our free Creative Writing Booster Kit which is ideal for 11+ students.

You can also download the accompanying worksheet that goes with the tutorial. Remember that it’s key to watch the tutorial first so that the worksheet makes sense. Details on how to access the worksheet are under the video.

Click the PLAY button above to watch the Facebook Live Tutorial video I did on how to start a creative writing story in a way that WOWs examiners and teachers. This tutorial is ideal for students who are in Key Stages 2 and 3 and are preparing for exams including the 10+, 11+ and even 13+ exams.

How to make the most of this free tutorial

  1. Treat it like a real lesson. With a real lesson, your child would have a pen and paper and would have the mindset that they’re about to learn something new. Encourage them to be focused and make the most of the lesson.

  2. Encourage your child to take notes or write down any words or phrases that stand out to them.

  3. Have fun! For the students that attended this live tutorial, they were able to comment as I was teaching. If you’re watching the replay on Youtube, your child can instead, comment under the video and I’ll be able to read their messages and reply or give any additional guidance.

Click here to download the worksheet that accompanies the tutorial.

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Like I said above, make sure you watch the tutorial first.

To take part in the next free English tutorial, head over to our Facebook page and click the LIKE button. Then, login every Wednesday at 7pm.

I look forward to teaching your child then.

Kind regards,

The Tutoress.

11+ Vocabulary Word List: 600 Popular Words From Grammar and Independent School Past Papers

11+ Vocabulary Word List: 600 Popular Words From Grammar and Independent Schools

Vocabulary is one of the most important parts of the 11+ exam.

Put simply, the better your child’s vocabulary, the more likely they are to:

✔️ Understand the meanings of complicated words.

✔️ Score higher marks when answering comprehension questions because they know the meanings of a wide range of words.

✔️ Use  a wider range of vocabulary when writing stories and answering written-response questions.

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Research shows that children with excellent vocabulary outperform other students in all subjects at GCSE level.

Since it can be difficult finding all of the words that your child needs to know in preparation for the exam, we’re sharing 600 of the most popular 11+ words. Many of these words have appeared in past papers for competitive grammar and independent schools.

Make sure you download and print this word list and aim to learn at least 5-10 words a week.

A snippet of the words in the list is below. Click here to access the full list of words.


600+ Key 11+ Vocabulary Words 

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  1. Stagnant 

  2. Ferocious

  3. Dread

  4. Untenable 

  5. Intentness 

  6. Condone 

  7. Conquering 

  8. Apprise 

  9. Impala

  10. Albeit 

  11. Mire 

  12. Ascetic 

  13. Pallid

  14. Heath

  15. Swarthy 

  16. Vegetation 

  17. Thorough

  18. Ghastly 

  19. Thoroughgoing 

  20. Dictator

  21. Pernicious 

  22. Pestilential 

  23. Recede

  24. Supple

  25. Bastion 

  26. Conciliatory

  27. Goad 

  28. Recess

  29. Solitude 

  30. Nook

  31. Subdued 

  32. Immersed 

  33. Immunity 

  34. Deplete 

  35. Siege

  36. Magnamonious 

  37. Deflates

  38. Disruptive 

  39. Indulgence

  40. Incite 

  41. Sanctimonious 

  42. Qualms 

  43. Transpire 

  44. Trite 

  45. Bulwark

  46. Crepuscular 

  47. Magnificent 

  48. Sage

  49. Precise 

  50. Decree

5 Tips to Improve Your Child’s 11+ Vocabulary – Even If They Hate Reading

5 Tips to Improve Your Child’s 11+ Vocabulary – Even If They Hate Reading

Whilst some children love learning new vocabulary words, the vast majority find studying 11+ vocabulary difficult.

To be frank, if the most intelligent of adults struggle with 11+ vocabulary then it’s no surprise that it’s difficult for a nine or ten-year-old to. 

Most conventional advice recommends reading as being one of the fastest and most powerful ways to improve vocabulary in children of all ages.

Whilst it’s great advice and there is no denying the academic benefits of reading, the reality is that not all children love to read and it can be extremely difficult to get a reluctant reader to read regularly in the bid to improve their vocabulary.

So what can you do to help your child improve their 11+ vocab without forcing them to read copious amounts of books?

Here are five suggestions that will hopefully make things easier for you and your child.

1. Create a word wall or board.

Instead of reading pages of vocabulary words, their synonyms and antonyms, instead try and create a board for either an individual word or a collective group of words. For example, if your child has 10 new words to learn this week, you could make a word board that includes pictures of things that remind them of the meaning of each of the words.

As a rule of thumb, I advise learning at least 2 new words a day but bumping that number up where possible. In terms of word walls and word boards, there’s so much you can do if you use your imagination.

What you’ll need:

a) Felt tip pens/colouring pencils 

b) A3 paper (coloured paper is preferred)

c) Glue 

d) Images of things that remind your child of the definition of each word. You can print these from Google.

e). A list of vocabulary words (see below)

If you don’t have these materials on hand, do what the wonderful S.L. Ager did with her children and simply use a blackboard and chalk to create word boards. Then take pictures of each board and print them. 

2. Listen to the radio.

Radio stations often have debates where socio-political topics are discussed and high-level vocabulary is used. Listening to them with your child provides them with the benefit of understanding how certain words are used in context as well as opening them up to words they’ve probably never heard before.

Once again, you can make this activity fun by incorporating arts and crafts into it or incorporating another activity that your child enjoys.

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3. Talk more. 

In this day and age where we’re often glued to our phones or laptops, it’s easy to dismiss our children and to sort of tune out to their needs.

However, in this digitalised age, it’s more important than ever to engage in conversations with children so that they benefit from face-to-face interactions and pick up new vocabulary in a very natural way.

Often enough, they won’t notice that they’re leaning the meaning of a new word simply by talking to you. For instance, if your child needs to learn the meaning of “perturbed,” why not use that word as many times during the day as you can or encourage them to use the word as much as possible?

You could even have a competition where the person who uses the word most within a day wins a prize. Once again, it’s about thinking creatively and outside of the box.

4.  Play Games

There’s an old adage that says children learn through play. Sadly, sometimes as children get older, we forget how important play is in helping to stimulate and enhance their academic skills.

It provides them with so many benefits and acts as the perfect bonding moment for both of you. Games such as Scrabble are particularly great for vocabulary building and to be honest, playing Scrabble doesn’t feel like ‘work.

5. Change The Décor

Don’t you just love a change of scenery? I’m sure you do and your child probably does too.

There’s a really easy way to change your child’s visual environment whilst boosting their vocabulary and that’s simply by decorating their room with things that stimulate their vocabulary or, if you prefer an even simpler choice, stick vocabulary words on the wall of their bedroom.

You can make this activity fun by writing the word on a piece of card paper and adding the definition, synonym, and antonym underneath so that they can see the meaning every time they see the word. It makes vocabulary building fun because you can decorate the cards, add glitter, sparkles, use felt tips or add anything that will help motivate your child to look at the card and learn the word.

Often enough, you’ll find that they’ll glance at the word once or twice a day and over time they’ll pick up its meaning. If you’re feeling fancy, you could even add words to magnetic slates and stick them on the fridge. 

Boosting your child’s vocabulary might seem like a daunting task but if you dedicate enough time and effort into it, it will really pay off.

Sometimes certain elements of 11+ preparation are arduous but the key is to break some of the big tasks (like vocab building) into small chunks (like word walls or word decor) and overtime, things will get easier and your child will start making great progress.

Consistency is key.

That’s it for today. Let me know if the above tips and tricks have helped by leaving a comment below.

PS. Do you need an 11+ vocabulary word list?

If so, check out 50 vocabulary words below. 

Fifty 11+ Vocabulary Words

  1. Brook

  2. Quintessential 

  3. Calibrate 

  4. Pessimistic 

  5. Optimistic 

  6. Pillage 

  7. Figurative 

  8. Formative 

  9. Shrill 

  10. Disturbance 

  11. Synchronise

  12. Countenance

  13. Prudent 

  14. Gist 

  15. Obscure 

  16. Foolhardy 

  17. Homogeneous 

  18. Surreptitious 

  19. Verbose

  20. Succinct 

  21. Concise 

  22. Brevity 

  23. Plausible 

  24. Enigma

  25. Vigorous

  26. Pallid 

  27. Tremulous 

  28. Labyrinth 

  29. Rutilant 

  30. Loquacious 

  31. Taunt 

  32. Becoming 

  33. Cunning

  34. Manipulative 

  35. Perturbed 

  36. Underwrite

  37. Sly 

  38. Conceal

  39. Overt 

  40. Covert 

  41. Apex

  42. Zenith 

  43. Conservative

  44. Waffle 

  45. Meticulous 

  46. Knotty

  47. Mariner 

  48. Tufty 

  49. Infiltrate

  50. Iteration 

11+ Creative Writing Example: (A Must-Read For Students Who Want To Score Full Marks)

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As a tutor, I can count on one hand the number of times a student has written a story that has blown me away or left me wanting more. It’s so rare in fact that I hardly award marks of 90% or more. When I do, it’s usually because the student’s work meets the criteria of excellent or outstanding writing.

Now, every child has a different writing style. Some children write very descriptively, others include a lot of dialogue, and some use a mix of devices. I believe that children with naturally unique or quirky writing styles should retain as much of this as possible as it helps to set their work apart from others. One of my students (who’s now at Harrow) is a prime example of this. His writing is very descriptive and I’ve always encouraged him to keep and foster his natural love of descriptive language and expression.

Although I’m sure you’re eager to download the writing example from one of my students, but before you do, I want you and your child to pay attention to the notes underneath the example. They contain key tips that reflect the criteria that examiners and admissions tutors base mark allocation on. It’s key that you read this section with your child and encourage them to follow the tips mentioned.

Furthermore, it’s vital to write on a daily basis. Even if it’s just for 10 minutes. In fact, if your child is pressed for time, encourage them to simply spend 5 minutes coming up with a plan for a story or composition title. In doing so, they’ll improve their ability to think quickly and come up with story ideas in a few short minutes.

This is vital as students often struggle with creative writing in the 11+ exam because they can’t think of a story idea or can’t think of a way to start their story and they therefore end up stuck. This slows them down and costs them marks.

I’ll be sharing my best tips and tricks for creative writing success in a future post so keep an eye out for more details by checking the blog regularly.

Here’s to your child’s success!

Victoria, The Tutoress.

My child is struggling with comprehension. Do you have any ideas of how to help them improve?

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Comprehension is one of the areas of English where students struggle the most.

There are several reasons for this such as:

  • Not understanding the passage

  • Having a limited vocabulary 

  • Not using the right techniques

  • A lack of interest in reading 

And more.

These days, schools place a huge emphasis on Maths which is great but the unfortunate effect of this is that an increasing number of children dislike Literacy. Quite often, when I’m teaching, I ask my students what their favourite subject is and Maths is always the preferred choice.

To combat this and help your child increase their enthusiasm for English and comprehension, in particular, there are a few things you can do.

These include:

Taking them to the library and making it a proper day or afternoon out where you choose books. You could even organise a trip to a famous or large library that’s outside of your local area. There are some beautiful libraries across the country and they’re great for helping children to ignite their passion for reading.

Help them to use comprehension techniques when doing ‘fun’ things. For instance, while watching a movie, you could ask them who the protagonist is. That’s a big word but if your child is a student of our Clever Comprehension Academy programme, they’ll know what it means. You could also ask them to write a summary of what happens in the film as this is a great way to check their retention skills. 

When it comes to reading passages and understanding them better, here are some great tips.

Visualise the text.

When reading, it’s important to create images of what’s happening. This enables you to paint a picture of the story and to answer questions more easily. Visualisation is really powerful!

When reading, ask your child to picture what they see.

Focus more on the questions than on the passage or text.

Students often make the mistake of focusing heavily on the passage and it causes them to worry about big words they don’t know the meaning of, events that don’t quite make sense and tiny little details that are confusing.

Often enough, the questions in the exam don’t always assess these things and students who focus on the passage too much can find themselves losing marks. 

Instead of being passage-obsessed, focus on the questions that are being asked. Read them carefully and find the answers in the passage. 

Think like a detective

Instead of worrying about understanding the meaning behind every detail within the passage or text, focus on thinking like a detective who searches for answers.

Highlight and underline the answers as you find them in the passage; some students choose to write the question number next to the answer or highlighted word/phrase which is another great thing to do.

The key is on shifting your thinking from worrying about understanding everything to focus on finding the answers.

Be mindful of inference.

Examiners are constantly checking to see if students understand how to infer. What does this mean? It’s testing their ability to read between the lines of any text and draw conclusions. 

Inference is about thinking strategically and using the clues within a text to understand what’s happening on a deeper level. For example, if in the text it says that the character beamed with joy, we can interpret that the character is happy

If on the other hand, it says that a character hung their head and dropped their shoulders, we can infer that they’re sad, withdrawn or possibly even ashamed.

Do you see how inference works now? It’s a wonderful skill to develop.

Learn to PEE.

For students sitting multiple choice exams such as the CEM, they don’t have to worry about this but for those sitting standard exams such as those popularly used by independent schools, learning to PEE is really important.

What’s PEE? It stands for point, evidence, explanation. Put simply, when answering questions, students need to be able to write detailed answers where they firstly make a point (which answers the question), back that point up using evidence from the text (such as a quote) and finally, explain the relevance of the quote to the point and the answer that’s been set. 

Here’s a quick example.

Question: How is George described in the passage? (3 marks)

Answer: George is described as being a tall, baby-faced man who is highly likeable. In the passage, he is described as “having the countenance of a King” which suggests that he is naturally likeable and commands respect in the same way a king or monarch would. 

In the example above, the first line focuses on making a point that answers the question. The second line provides a relevant quote and the third provides the explanation which is linked to the question to show relevance. 

I hope this article helps you and your child to see that comprehension doesn’t have to be difficult.

It can be broken down so that it’s easy to score higher marks. The key is in focusing on building inference skills, knowing what examiners are looking for and learning to search for the answers rather than worrying about understanding every little detail in the text.

Do you have any other comprehension tips you’d like to share? We’d love to hear them.

Leave them in the comments below. 

Ps. If your child still needs help with comprehensive, check out our online course which can be accessed 24/7. It’s called Clever Comprehension Academy.

Here’s to your child’s success!

The Tutoress Team.